Is it possible to get the texture back in the jacket? Look back in your older renders...The jacket had bright texturing and the face was cleaner looking. Links below. You need a bit of the old with the new.
Hey Jonny :-) I know you're knackered and sick of this scene, but she's growing in finesse and sophistication with every amendment; but remember what Alan said about the shadow of the grille on the back wall - actually, the lattice work would be much more diffuse in terms of its shadow, because the light casting it would be soft too - just 'relax' it. i notice she's got her fingernails painted - but can you make them longer and more feminine?
Also - get those hypodermic needles in place, Jonny - get some brass/glass/needle glinting in the darkness... I know you're working on this, but you need to give those snakes their bite! :-)
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Is it possible to get the texture back in the jacket? Look back in your older renders...The jacket had bright texturing and the face was cleaner looking. Links below. You need a bit of the old with the new.
http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_yTVGNhZ85Hs/S_m6bFMcRgI/AAAAAAAABtE/KDHcdJDqAYw/s1600/medusasnk2.jpg
http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_yTVGNhZ85Hs/S_06XwkvnvI/AAAAAAAABv8/0FX_6iXzylk/s1600/Pose_01.jpg
Hey Jonny :-) I know you're knackered and sick of this scene, but she's growing in finesse and sophistication with every amendment; but remember what Alan said about the shadow of the grille on the back wall - actually, the lattice work would be much more diffuse in terms of its shadow, because the light casting it would be soft too - just 'relax' it. i notice she's got her fingernails painted - but can you make them longer and more feminine?
see
http://just4u2.files.wordpress.com/2009/05/fingernails_care1.jpg
Also - get those hypodermic needles in place, Jonny - get some brass/glass/needle glinting in the darkness... I know you're working on this, but you need to give those snakes their bite! :-)
Keep going!!!
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